She was dramatically opposed to pretty much everything. There was nothing that she could get involved with that didn’t invoke some sort of pressure from her stomach upwards. What she did consider was the potential of getting on the table in the middle of the meting and squatting over the spider phone, relieving herself all over the client’s voice. This, she smiled to herself, was a considerable action worth thinking about for 30 minutes. stumbling towards the corporate kitchenette, she wondered if al kooper would show up in her dreams again. There was nothing wrong with his music, but she always connected it with a unsettling feeling of placenta and mangoes. Luckily she had brought some mango juice with her from home. Lorelei was off to a great start for the week as long as Eddie from compliance didn’t decide to hit on her match.com profile.
1st pages #2
March 9th, 2007 · 7 Comments
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Kyomara // Mar 11, 2007 at 3:57 pm
Nice, but not enough pop culture references.
Le Concierge // Mar 11, 2007 at 9:54 pm
Damn Gina! This is pretty good! Just remember some rules: was she dramatic in her opposition or was her opposition dramatic?; Capitalization, Damn It!; Spelling: meeting not meting.; Avoid unnecessary words — What she did consider could be She considered, also more active.; Finally, there is no such word as “towards” unless you are from the UK, and they can barely speak English.
I miss your warm embrace.
LC
jsd // Mar 11, 2007 at 9:57 pm
Kyomara, I’ll let you know when I want your pithiness. Till then, keep it in the freezer with my suppopsicles. (that was all yours baby.)
Le C: welcome back. And also, bite me. douchekebob.
Kyomara, Esq. // Mar 12, 2007 at 2:10 pm
Suppopsicles…
Is he related to Pericles?
pinecuddles // Mar 12, 2007 at 8:16 pm
I like. Almost erotic. LC took the words out of my mouth, or letters out of my hands … i guess. It’s almost perfect. Except that I disagree, she did not, in fact, bring mango juice from home. No. She is allergic to mango juice. She gets little tiny bumps all over her tongue when she eats or drinks it.
I think Suppopsicles is Spartan … Pericles probably didn’t know him.
Le Concierge // Mar 12, 2007 at 9:14 pm
Nay! He is brother to Homercles!
mvb // Mar 14, 2007 at 12:40 pm
what, now youre leaving tidbits of your writing prowess for the masses to pick apart. Fuck that, no Gtown or Pine U. degree lets people do that. Keep it to yourself, your power could destroy their minds if wielded too soon.
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